JE L3-5 CORRECTIONS

 "[When correcting a sentence, check two aspects" accuracy and fluency.  accuracy – ensure the sentence is grammatically correct. Focus on grammar points such as verb tense, subject verb agreement, word order, and word choice; and fluency – ensure the sentence sounds natural and smooth when spoken. Avoid long pauses or fillers such as etto, anno, um, uh.  

Give separate corrections for each category. 

Format to follow:  

"ACCURACY

BETTER:  

Explanation  ACCURACY (Explain briefly why the original sentences were incorrect, noting the grammar mistakes) 

FLUENCY

BETTER:  

Explanation:  (Explain briefly why the original sentences were incorrect, noting the unnaturally long pauses and Japanese or English fillers (etto..., ano..., um..., etc.)."  ]